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    As-salam Alaikum Forum,,

    Main phir aa gayi na

    chalen 1 or game khelte hain achi wali

    rate the above sher

    Read the share from the post that's above you nd rate it from 1-10

    nd post a shair as well for Next person,,

    simple si hai hena

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    Okay first Me,

    Khuda Ka Rizq tu Hergiz Zamee'n Pe Kam Nahin
    Magar Ye Kaatne Waale..... Magar Ye Baantne Waale !!


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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

    Quote Originally Posted by Ice View Post
    As-salam Alaikum Forum,,

    Main phir aa gayi na

    chalen 1 or game khelte hain achi wali

    rate the above sher

    Read the share from the post that's above you nd rate it from 1-10

    nd post a shair as well for Next person,,

    simple si hai hena

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    Okay first Me,

    Khuda Ka Rizq tu Hergiz Zamee'n Pe Kam Nahin
    Magar Ye Kaatne Waale..... Magar Ye Baantne Waale !!


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    kamal-E-Zabt Ko Khud Bhi To Azmaungi.....!
    Main Apne Hath Sai Us Ki Dulhan Sajaungi....!


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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

    6.5

    Saaf Keh Do Agar Gila Hai Koi
    Faisla.......... Fasile Se Acha Hai !!
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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

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    6.5

    Saaf Keh Do Agar Gila Hai Koi
    Faisla.......... Fasile Se Acha Hai !!
    7

    Hum Nai Us Raat Bhi Tumhein Maanga Tha....!
    Jes Raat Loug Bakhshish Ki Dua Maangtay Hein..!
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    Wo Hum Safar Tha ........ Mager Us Sai Humnawaie Na The ..........

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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

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    Maloom Hai Wo Loutne Wala Nahin, Phir Bhi............
    Ek Rasam Nibhati Hoon Main Palkon Ko Bhigo Kar!!


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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

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    Maloom Hai Wo Loutne Wala Nahin, Phir Bhi............
    Ek Rasam Nibhati Hoon Main Palkon Ko Bhigo Kar!!
    9

    Kioun Sharminda Kertay Ho Yeh Rasmi Baatein Pooch Ker....!
    Meyra Haal Woohi Hai jo Tu Nai Bana Rakha Hai......!
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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

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    Kafan Ki Girah Khol K Mera Deedar To Kar Hi Lena
    Band Ho Rahi Hain Wo Aankhain Jin Ko Tum Rulaya Karte The
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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

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    Kafan Ki Girah Khol K Mera Deedar To Kar Hi Lena
    Band Ho Rahi Hain Wo Aankhain Jin Ko Tum Rulaya Karte The
    7


    Yeh Jo Har Mor Py Aa Milti Hain Mujh Sy

    Aazmaishein Bhi Kahein Meri Deewani To Nahi


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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

    8.5

    Kabhi Waqt Mila Tu Suljhaoo'n Ga Teri Sabhi' Uljhani'en
    Abi Toh Khud Uljha Hua Honn Waqt Ko suljhanay Mein !!
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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

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    8.5

    Kabhi Waqt Mila Tu Suljhaoo'n Ga Teri Sabhi' Uljhani'en
    Abi Toh Khud Uljha Hua Honn Waqt Ko suljhanay Mein !!
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    Uska Wada Bhi Bra Ajeeb Tha k Zindagi Bhar Sath Nibhaunga

    Mene Ye bhi Nahi Pucha k Muhabbat k Sath ya Nafrat k Sath....


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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

    ahan too Good...

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    Bewafa Waqt Tha Tum The Ya Muqaddar Mera
    Baat Itni Hai...................... K Anjam Judayi Nikli
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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

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    ahan too Good...

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    Bewafa Waqt Tha Tum The Ya Muqaddar Mera
    Baat Itni Hai...................... K Anjam Judayi Nikli

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    Wo Qehat e Dosti Padaa hay in Dinon,

    Jo muskuraa K Bolay Wohi aashnaa Lagay...!!



    Wo Hum Safar Tha ........ Mager Us Sai Humnawaie Na The ..........

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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

    Quote Originally Posted by @rsh! View Post
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    Wo Qehat e Dosti Padaa hay in Dinon,

    Jo muskuraa K Bolay Wohi aashnaa Lagay...!!

    7

    Ik Aur Darya Ka Samna Tha Munir Mujh ko

    Mai IK K Paar Utra to Mai Ne Daikha
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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

    Quote Originally Posted by SUFYANWARIS View Post
    7

    Ik Aur Darya Ka Samna Tha Munir Mujh ko

    Mai IK K Paar Utra to Mai Ne Daikha
    6

    Nadeeem Tarq-E-Mohabbat Ko Ik Umar Hooie.....!
    Mai Abh Bhi Sooch Raha Hon K Bhul Jaon Usay...!

    Wo Hum Safar Tha ........ Mager Us Sai Humnawaie Na The ..........

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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

    maza a gya phar k
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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

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    Nadeeem Tarq-E-Mohabbat Ko Ik Umar Hooie.....!
    Mai Abh Bhi Sooch Raha Hon K Bhul Jaon Usay...!
    7

    Udaas logo! Hajoom lAo, Hussn WaLo'n kO mAar DaAlAin,
    Koi To NaIkI ka KaAm Ker lain tabah to waisay bhi ho chukay hein

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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

    Quote Originally Posted by _Ghost_ View Post
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    Udaas logo! Hajoom lAo, Hussn WaLo'n kO mAar DaAlAin,
    Koi To NaIkI ka KaAm Ker lain tabah to waisay bhi ho chukay hein

    7

    Kuch Ziyada Hi Nafrat Karta Hai Ye Zamana Ham Se

    In Se Keh Do K Husn-E-Yousuf To Nhe Pr Dil-E_Bilal To Hum B Rakhty Hen.


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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

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    7

    Kuch Ziyada Hi Nafrat Karta Hai Ye Zamana Ham Se

    In Se Keh Do K Husn-E-Yousuf To Nhe Pr Dil-E_Bilal To Hum B Rakhty Hen.

    7

    چھڑاکر ھاتھ نرمی سے یہی کہتی ہے روزنہ
    ابھی تک غیر مہرم ہوں تمہاری کچھ نہیں لگتی
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    if knowledge is the key then just show me the lock




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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

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    چھڑاکر ھاتھ نرمی سے یہی کہتی ہے روزنہ
    ابھی تک غیر مہرم ہوں تمہاری کچھ نہیں لگتی
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    Chiryon Se Kaho Apne Nasheman Se Na Nikle

    Is Daur Ka Har Shakhs Uqaabon Ki Tarha Hai

    Wo Hum Safar Tha ........ Mager Us Sai Humnawaie Na The ..........

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    Re: Rate The Previous Sher

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    Chiryon Se Kaho Apne Nasheman Se Na Nikle

    Is Daur Ka Har Shakhs Uqaabon Ki Tarha Hai
    200000 number pa g aalaa shair

    Tum nein Poocha hai Mager kaisay butain tumko ??

    Dukh ibarat to nahi hain jo tumhain likh bhaijain....
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