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bohat zabr10![]()
Thanks for appriciating
very nice shair beautifull and simple designing![]()
نہیں نا امید اقبال اپنی کشت ویران سے
ذرا نم ہو تو یہ مٹی بڑی زرخیز ہے ساقی
nice onee![]()
Thanks to both of you Master and Komal![]()
Zabardast....kya kehna......
Aaye Na Baalam Waada Kar Ke....
.●๋•HaPpY EiD MuBaRaK .●๋•
zabardast bhut acha likha hai aap nay
Thank you everyone
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very very nice
SunOo...!Mujh KO Yaad KarO Gye Na..???..
thanks guys![]()
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nice ...........
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Mahwish, It is beautifull!
Meri yahan pehli posting hai,umeed hai aap sab
mujhe guide karein ge!
Rab mehar kare saade te,
zindagi diaan asaan puriaa hon,
assin rahie har pal naal tuhade ,
mohobbata vich na kade dooriyan hon.
It is better to have loved and lost
then to never have loved at all
Meri mohabbat ki bas itni si kahaani hai
Ek tutti hui kashti aur ruka hua pani hai
Ek gulaab hai jo unki kitaab mein dam tod chuka hai
Aur unhe yaad bhi nahin ye kisi ki nishani hai
It is better to have loved and lost
then to never have loved at all
Welcome khalid
& ur poetry is good
& Mehwish ji ur poetry is also very good
Apni to mohobbat ki itni si kahani hai,
Tooti howi kashti thehra howa pani hai,
Ek phool kitabo mein dam tod chuka hai,
Magar kuch yaad nahi aata ye kiski nishani hai
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nice sharing
ITT is the best
thanks to all![]()
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