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Jaan !!!

This is a discussion on Jaan !!! within the Ashaar forums, part of the Designed Poetry category; I Love This Shair siliye Mehnat b boht ki hy Ab aap he btayen k main kis had tak kamyab ...

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    lol Jaan !!!

    I Love This Shair
    siliye Mehnat b boht ki hy
    Ab aap he btayen k main kis had tak kamyab hua hoon ???
    Or I Know k ye Comments sirf 1 Member ne parhnay hain
    Baki Sab Sharing ko dekhain gay
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    Re: Jaan !!!

    ara wah mayray bahya bhut khubsurat yar
    we are waiting 4 replies... yar

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    Api mehnat ka ajar mil giya,,,

    Thanks Alot
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    ara wah mayray bahya bhut khubsurat yar
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    we are waiting 4 replies... yar

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    Re: Jaan !!!

    beautiful work




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    Thanks Alot Angle
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    beautiful work

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    is baat ka kya matlab howa k aik member nay parhnay hain??

    maani chachu shair pasandeeda to hay laiken sahi nahi hay

    sahi kuch yoon hay

    Tujh say bichar kar bhi zinda hain
    Jaaan! Bohat sharminda hain

    wesay bhi dekha jaaye to poetry main barry ki jaga bohat zyada munaasib lagta hay..

    Designing awsome behtreeen banai hay
    "I wish for a Martial Law that would kill at least 50,000 people, mostly, ex-servicemen, Chaudhries, Bhuttos, judges and all the other infiltrators and thugs who have held 160 million Pakistanis"


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    lol Re: Jaan !!!

    Nhi Mere Bhai Jehaan Bhi parha hy Dobara Parho
    I'm Sure k isi trah hy

    Main SMS's Ko Copy ker k design nhi kerta

    Thanks Alot
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    is baat ka kya matlab howa k aik member nay parhnay hain??
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    maani chachu shair pasandeeda to hay laiken sahi nahi hay

    sahi kuch yoon hay

    Tujh say bichar kar bhi zinda hain
    Jaaan! Bohat sharminda hain

    wesay bhi dekha jaaye to poetry main barry ki jaga bohat zyada munaasib lagta hay..

    Designing awsome behtreeen banai hay

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    aap nay kahan say parha hay phir?
    "I wish for a Martial Law that would kill at least 50,000 people, mostly, ex-servicemen, Chaudhries, Bhuttos, judges and all the other infiltrators and thugs who have held 160 million Pakistanis"


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    Mujhay Confirm tu nhi k ye kis Poet ka hy lekin jiska hy Main nay Usi ki Book main parha tha Minimum 4 saal pehlay
    O.k
    Or I think k Faiz sahab ka hy
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    aap nay kahan say parha hay phir?

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    Re: Jaan !!!

    acha

    4 saal pehlay parha tha aap nay to ab aap bhool gaye hain shair wesay hai jesay main nay bataya hay
    "I wish for a Martial Law that would kill at least 50,000 people, mostly, ex-servicemen, Chaudhries, Bhuttos, judges and all the other infiltrators and thugs who have held 160 million Pakistanis"


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    Re: Jaan !!!

    so nice

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    Re: Jaan !!!

    Walekam-Aslam, shair kafi acha hai
    designing ki attempt achi hai, colour combination is very impressive, however; yeh jo border per brushes use kiye hein, woh achey nahi lag rahey, charon kono per laga diye hein aap ney, not bad, lekin brushes ko inner, outer glow ki bilkul lour nahi thi, text is very clear, bus brushes ki wajh say messy si lag rahi hai designing!
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    lol Re: Jaan !!!

    Thanks Alot sanam
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    so nice

    Thanks You so much k aap ne achhay ki bjaye sechay comments se nawaza
    insha ALLAH Next time zaroor khiyal Rekhoonga
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    Walekam-Aslam, shair kafi acha hai
    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    designing ki attempt achi hai, colour combination is very impressive, however; yeh jo border per brushes use kiye hein, woh achey nahi lag rahey, charon kono per laga diye hein aap ney, not bad, lekin brushes ko inner, outer glow ki bilkul lour nahi thi, text is very clear, bus brushes ki wajh say messy si lag rahi hai designing!

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    Re: Jaan !!!

    nice one.........

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    Re: Jaan !!!

    Very Nice Beautiphool!

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    Re: Jaan !!!

    very nice............

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    Thanks Bright eye
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    Very Nice Beautiphool!

    Thanks Ayebenzer
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    very nice............

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    Re: Jaan !!!

    Thanks Sumera

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    very nice

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